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Peer Review: Edits to Monell Article
Hey Nina, Your thoughts for improvement of the Monell v. Department of Social Services of the City of New York article page seem really on point. I especially agree that the "Significance" section, which currently stands at one sentence, would be a great place to add value. I also like the sources you've selected to use as you build up the article. They appear to present a variety of source types (cases, journal articles, treatise sections). My only concrete suggestion would be to pick one area of the article to improve, rather than distributing your edits among the various sections (unless, of course, you see something inaccurate). I think you can have the most impact that way.Ahavriliak (talk) 20:38, 11 May 2018 (UTC)