User talk:Monica.Keim/sandbox

Monica,

I'm not sure what portions you edited so I'm looking at the entire article critically.

"A portion of the river flows through a canyon up to 400 feet deep, emptying into the Knik Arm of Cook Inlet approximately 17 miles (27 km) northeast of Anchorage." The first part sentence seems out of place and is vague. If there is a descrption of the river course, it seem like it should start at the lake and and be descriptive downstream. I'm not sure what relevance the canyon had. I would break it up and put where it enters the Knick Arm at the end of the paragraph

There is no overview of the page, like summary of what will be covered it just goes from a description of the river to upper dam and lower dam without any sort of transition about the fact two dams were built. The history of the dams and then the removal is the most notable thing about this river that people would want to know about.

have link to Eklutna Glacier wiki

The lower dam portion needs to talk about it's removal and restoration of the river channel work. There's no reference to the water being used for the Anchorage water utility.

References!!! There are a lot of facts presented and no references. (maybe I can't see them in the sandbox?)

Howets (talk) 03:58, 31 October 2020 (UTC)