User talk:Monicamoo14/sandbox

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You must cite statements. Improve your writing style; do not give your opinion in this encyclopedic document. Remove this (it is in the wrong place): I am a viticulture and Enology undergraduate major at Cornell University. Remove: “if not all,” from the first sentence. Yeast never use all the sugar. So ‘no *perceptible* sugar” in the next sentence. “earthy” when we don’t taste sugar should be removed- it is an odor (not a taste) and I have never heard that our perception of it increases in dry ciders. Cite the source if you have one. Capitalize France, and cite that sentence or omit the reference to US ciders. There are many French ciders, for instance, with some sweetness, so you need to be careful not to state your opinions. OK, if you have a reliable source, but cite it/them.Oenotropae (talk) 20:05, 4 May 2018 (UTC)

Tone
"I am a viticulture and Enology undergraduate major at Cornell University." Should be on your userpage. Please review the tone is expected here. Also you need to cite your sentences properly, look here for that. Bryantlib (talk) 16:11, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Before making the paragraph 'live'
Remember to work with group members when uploading to the live page to ensure you dont upload the same information. Also consider how you will insert your information into the existing cider page. You may have to break up your sentences or not include everything depending on the information that is already on the page.

PROOFREAD your paragraph before you make your information 'live'.

Before you post make sure one person in your group created a new section on the Cider apple talk page you are uploading to, letting the people watching the page know you are making edits. And also make sure you summarize your final change, when submitting to the live page. If you don't remember how to do these steps, re-watch the tutorial. :)Bryantlib (talk) 16:11, 7 May 2018 (UTC)

Adding information to Cider page
You are inserting information on the Cider page, which is semi-protected. To add your paragraphs to the live page, you will need to have made at least 10 edits. You can do this in several ways; editing in your sandbox or a group member's sandbox, or/and going through and doing the steps in the tutorial all add edits to your username. If you change something and hit 'publish changes' it counts as an edit. The little box called 'Notices' on the top right of all the Wikipedia pages tells you when you have made 10 edits. Bryantlib (talk) 16:11, 7 May 2018 (UTC)