User talk:Moninou

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Immunexpress
Hi, thanks for your message. I deleted your article because
 * it did not provide adequate independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. You gave three references, but one didn't mention your company and the other two were reporting what your CEO said, hardly independent sources
 * it's all about what the company organisation does, little about the company itself other than locations. How many employees? Turnover? there is nothing in the text to suggest that the company is notable, even if it actually is. the article had been tagged for lack of asserted notability earlier
 * The "Peer-Reviewed Articles" section (should be Peer-reviewed articles) seems entirely pointless. I couldn't find any mention of your company in any of these. the article is about the company, not the medical stuff.
 * it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. Another editor tagged this article for deletion, and since it seemed to be only about your products, rather than the company, I agreed that it amounted to a sales pitch and deleted accordingly.

I've seen worse, and if you think you can expand and properly reference the article, I'm willing to sandbox the text for you to improve, just let me know (I'm a Brit, so you might not get an instant response given the time diff. Jimfbleak - talk to me?  16:36, 4 May 2015 (UTC)


 * Deleted text here Jimfbleak - talk to me?  05:01, 5 May 2015 (UTC)