User talk:Monkeybomber

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Hello, Monkeybomber, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hello! I have peer reviewed your draft and looked at the article you're working on. I think what you have added has improved the lead so far! I am attaching my general notes of what can be improved on in the article overall (not necessarily just by you). Good job!

- The edited lead section really improves upon what is already there > could still use some added length such as adding about the origin and some more sources (unless the linked Wikipedia articles count)

- A lot of sections in the overall article need sources. There are full paragraphs that go without citations > this is what needs the most work in my opinion

- Statements like “some anarcho-primitivists” are not cited and seem vague or even assumption-based

Thanks! -- Wiki811pedia (talk) 03:31, 29 October 2020 (UTC)

Anarcho-primitivism Edits
I think the sources you've included are helpful, and I might suggest including the names of the scholars/authors within the body of the article itself. This could clarify what you're saying when you reference "some anarcho-primitivists." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jmrankin (talk • contribs) 18:58, 8 November 2020 (UTC)