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i need help in changing title of aticle to sports broadcaster. Right now it reads sport bradcaster. also there is one line that requires clarification. i have made adjustments to the sentence. It is confusing as to what else to do. Thank YouMonmouth1946 (talk) 03:54, 8 January 2020 (UTC)

Tommy Roberts (sportscaster)
i have changed the sentence in the text that needed clarification. The clarification notice has mot been removed. What should I do? Thank YouMonmouth1946 (talk) 13:30, 8 January 2020 (UTC)
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Tommy Roberts (sports broad caster)
I have finished the article.. Would an editor take a look at it and check it for any error before submission. Thank YouMonmouth1946 (talk) 21:40, 8 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Perhaps confusingly, I moved your draft from 'draftspace' to 'mainspace' as I thought it was good enough. As a draft, only a few other editors will be aware of its existence, whereas in the main article space it will be found by more people and hopefully they'll help improve it.
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Thank You.. would you be kind enough to see if the article now has an encyclopedic Tone to it. If so what nextMonmouth1946 (talk) 12:45, 10 January 2020 (UTC)

Tommy Roberts (sports broadcaster)
I have made many changes to try to get an encyclopedic look. Editors have also made adjustments. Will someone look it over and let me know if it has a n encyclopedic look thank youMonmouth1946 (talk) 01:56, 10 January 2020 (UTC)
 * Please do not tag your edits as minor if they are not. If you are not sure, do not tag as minor. Minor is reserved for small changes, such as typos, grammar or spelling errors. David notMD (talk) 03:47, 10 January 2020 (UTC)

I have a peacockldate in front of article title. Can anyone fix this. Thank youMonmouth1946 (talk) 16:09, 10 January 2020 (UTC)

Tommy Roberts ( sports broadcaster
Also The article was given a C rating before numerous changes were made. Can this be reviewed before submissionMonmouth1946 (talk) 18:04, 10 January 2020 (UTC)