User talk:Monserod

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Hello, Monserod, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer edit
The beginning of the paragraph was really well written and explained. As I got to the third sentence I had to read more than one time to somewhat follow the process that you are explaining. For your second paragraph you did a great job explaining what is next and the different options the person has for the light source. It was also helpful to explain why each source is good or bad. I was going to ask about wait time but thank you for clearing it up towards the end of the paragraph. I tries to click on your sources and they are not taking me to where you go the information. In your second paragraph you also give great detail about the options that the person has and its pro and cons. Again the only thing would be that your sources do not take me to your links. The structure was great and easy to follow except in the first paragraph. But other than that i was really able to learn something.