User talk:Moogandang/Andy Everson/Bibliography

Peer Review: Andy Everson by Bella U.A.

So, because I’m not sure whether there is another sandbox regarding your rough draft, I’d like to review the content regarding the description of Andy Everson. So far, I really like how short and concise you are when it comes to stating the basic facts that a reader would first like to know. Through your brief synopsis, I do notice that this small paragraph is missing key details such as the school in which Everson pursued his Masters, proper quotations coming from the artist, and the types of works that he produced over time. By adding some citations to let the audience know where you gathered this information, it will really allow the reader to see your unbiased credibility and the efforts made during your research. Sadly because there isn’t an actual rough draft article that I can look at, one helpful resource that I’ve used to help me complete the rough draft was using the library’s Melvyl (UC) Catalog where I was able to find a couple of books that really helped narrow down the basic bibliography questions about the artist. Additionally, I think that by reviewing the training youtube videos regarding the process to set up your personalized sandbox will also help you when setting up your table of contents and additional infoboxes if need be. Seeing that you already know some key facts about the artist will create a great start as you complete your final draft, so in other words, you’ve got this!