User talk:Mooodsy/sandbox

Article Evaluation
The Story of An Hour The summary is very brief. I'm sure this is because it's such a short story, but I wonder if it would be helpful to go into detail about how Louise Mallard deals with the "death" of her husband? One could summarize the emotions and actions that occurred between finding out about her husband's death, and his return to the home.

It seems as though, especially under the analysis section, there is a lack of citations. There is even words in quotations with no citeation after. The format of the citations is inconsistent as well, making the article a bit confusing to follow. The WikiTraining said there should be a quote usually at least once every paragraph, or information from the story is cited. In this section, there is only three citations, and in the last three paragraphs.

Inconsistent grammar/sentence format in character section.

Though unintentional. I think some of the wording states a point of view/personal evaluation of the story and its' characters. For example, the phrases "selfish monster," "normal woman," "'The Story of an Hour" presents the heroine as a heartless person who does not fear the death of her husband, but instead is filled with glee and joy,'" all represent the author's own interpretation with no reference.

Too much quoted material used. Would be easier to follow if condensed.

Article Edit: Everyday Use
Christian brings to light the difference in attitudes and perspectives about a shared culture. Christian points out that to Maggie and her mother, honoring their culture meant honoring the personal past of their family, by carrying on their names or putting the quilt to use, while to Dee, that meant honoring aesthetic and ancient traditions, such as traditional African names or hanging the quilt to be seen but not utilized. It is this very realization that leads to their mother choosing to give Maggie the quilts.Mooodsy (talk) 22:32, 5 November 2019 (UTC)