User talk:Moore.sa/sandbox

Great inclusion of detail and thoroughness! Good breadth of sources. A few things to consider: 1. You may want to split this article up into relevant sub-headings, like social, familial, and neurological impacts/causes. This would make the article easier to read and flow more nicely. 2. Watch your grammar - there are some places you use parental instead of parent and should be flipped. 3. Summarize your quotes/main messaging instead of quoting directly from articles/papers - Wikipedia doesn't like direct quotes. Rshap94 (talk) 04:34, 28 March 2017 (UTC)