User talk:Moorec SacState/sandbox

Hello, sorry how long this took me, I like all the sections you have under the description, but I feel the Provenance should be moved somewhere else. Maybe History? It just seems a little out of place. In the preservation section, you wrote "17 of the Aberdeen pages are pricked for transfer, clearly seen in the Hyena folio.", I would consider that part of the Illumination section. I would also expand on it a little and maybe mention which other folios are pricked. In the preservation section you talk about the missing folios, I would have that section be called Damages or Missing Folios. I think you history section is done really well, and I like in the gallery the images say what the animal is. NPrice9520 (talk) 23:32, 15 April 2020 (UTC)