User talk:Moose1917/Birding in New York City/Fevans9 Peer Review

Peer Review Response
Hello Fevans9! Thank you for reviewing our article! I agree, I think we can find more/ better sources in the internet since New York city is the largest city in America! I also think that more images could be added to the article. I appreciate that you are eager to hear our presentation! BubblyBublik (talk) 13:33, 24 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi! Thank you for reviewing our article Fevans9. Also thank you for reviewing the article on wikipedia as we were still working on the article at the time.
 * The pointer on adding the affects of habitat loss and pesticides will definitely be included and we will also delve into the equity gaps of the sources. We have been given feed back by some of our other peers about particular sources that are not adequately representing the relevance and modern issues related to this article. Thank you for going through every source to accurately to reflect the issues at hand wit these as well. We are also interested in the images chosen and are actually thinking about changing the images to more reflect the topics we want to discuss, like habitat loss and migration of different species.
 * Best Moose Moose1917 (talk) 19:35, 24 October 2023 (UTC)