User talk:Moram Hassan/Lola Keyezua

Moram Hassan peer review
For Moram Hassan there was a good intro bio at the start that gives dates and specific details about Lolas past. There could have been a bit more said but overall it should be applied in the lead, content and body anyway.

The lead, article body, tone and balance are hard to discuss as I'm not sure if the user is done but there will certainly be much to discuss as the artist is very interesting with a colorful background.

In terms of sources and references, there were more than enough, all very thorough and unbiased. They weren't too short and very informative with little to nothing left out I wouldn't have added anything myself. Perhaps a few images and designs would have been good to give color to the work.

Overall was happy with what I saw just need to add images, stay organized and fill in the lead and body. Jometcalf13579 (talk) 18:20, 20 November 2023 (UTC)