User talk:Morbiusgreen/sandbox

=1st Edit Evaluation=

5/7/2019 Evaluation by DrMichaelWright
DrMichaelWright (talk) 05:52, 8 May 2019 (UTC)


 * Points: 36/40
 * Grade: 90%

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard. Since you're specifying that something had happened by a certain time, you should use the perfect past, rather than the simple past.
 * "By 800, Brescia became home..." should be 'By 800, Brescia had become home...'
 * "By 1500, Brescia became one..." should be 'By 1500, Brescia had become one...'

Language
Meets standard.
 * "...a painful incident..." suggests sympathy with the case. That's not appropriate language for an encyclopedia, which should remain neutral. (I know that's not your language, but you could have easily fixed it.)

Organization
Meets standard.

Coding
Meets standard.

Validity
Meets standard. I could not find the facts you mentioned in the text you referenced. If you had page numbers to where that information could be found, that would have been helpful.

Completion
Meets standard.

Relevance
Meets standard.

5/15/2019 Edit 2 Evaluation by Gabbym9903
Gabbym9903 (talk) 19:17, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

Spelling/Grammar
Meets standard.
 * The only mistake I noticed is when you say " the the Teatro di Verdura"

Language
Meets standard.
 * The language used is appropriate and corresponds to the expectations.

Organization
Meets standard.
 * The paragraphs are well-organized and overall the post looks good.

Coding
Meets standard.
 * The coding looks correct and there don't seem to be any mistakes.

Validity
Meets standard.
 * All of the information you have mentioned is appropriately cited and listed as a reference.

Completion
Nearly meets standard.
 * It doesn't contain the required 2 or more paragraphs' worth of information, so I'd recommend adding a bit more.

Relevance
Meets standard.
 * The information presented refers to the topic the entire time and the relevance is present.

5/15/2019 Edit 2 Evaluation by afackrell
afackrell (talk) 22:54, 15 May 2019 (PDT)


 * Points: 32/40
 * Grade: 80%

Spelling/Grammar
Nearly meets standard Spelling looks good, I noticed a second "the" and the festival may need to be capitalized.

Language
Meets standard Rework the first sentence, possibly, "Music is a large cultural export".

Organization
Exceeds standard Perfect paragraphs and headings.

Coding
Exceeds standard

Validity
Nearly meets standard Some obsolete information. Add more about the festival or another musical event to improve the second paragraph.

Completion
Does not meet standard I think more information could be added to meet the required length and amount. There is also a large portion of the citations missing so it should be easy to add more after you find more quality sources.

Relevance
Meets standard

Professor's Review
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