User talk:Morgainecirce/sandboxdoula

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Very nice work on your draft. Some things you could still work on Obviously you have a few empty sections, which should ideally have some content. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:54, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
 * You start by saying what a doula was traditionally, and then talk about "nowadays...". I think it would be better to start with the current meaning, and add the "traditionally" part in the second or third sentence.
 * Dr Marshall Klaus and Dr John Kennell, who conducted clinical trials... Wikipedia's style guide, you shouldn't use honorifics like "Dr" in articles.