User talk:Morgandonatello/Legion (2010 film)

OK. Green light for peer review. Given the way drafts are trickling in, you've got one peer review assigned to your article (and one peer review to complete). We need one more draft to appear and then you should get one more peer review and one more article to peer review. Keep an eye on your User Talk page. ProfHanley (talk) 17:01, 13 April 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review
Whose work are you reviewing? Morgandonatello

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Hi Morgan! Here's my peer review for you,

Lead

While I appreciate the additions you made to the original lead, I think both “fairly low budget” and “the limited cast” are too subjective. I feel that the original could be left as it is.

Content

Aside from the director, and possibly the director of photography, I don’t think you need to include all of the crew credits - unless there is something more to say about them. Is there any more info/trivia you can find about the filming/production of the movie?

I love that you included info about the soundtrack, however I think it should be under its own section titled “Soundtrack.”

Some helpful additions to the “Critical Response” section! A small note, you might want to introduce the EW quote with “Collis Clark of Entertainment Weekly” – same with the NYT quote.

I would say that the “Inconsistent Pacing” blog is not a significant enough source to include, and the section would still be solid without it.

The quote from the “Editor’s Notes” of the soundtrack should probably be removed, as it is biased and written in a way that will sell the soundtrack.

Tone and Balance

Other than that editor’s note, everything is written in a neutral/balanced way.

Sources and References

The link to the Michael Fleming Variety article (#3) does not work. The link to Dread Central (#11) does not work. The link to the Joe Leydon Variety article (#13) does not work.

SPBrewster (talk) 04:21, 22 April 2021 (UTC)