User talk:Morgangoodyear/sandbox

Peer Review
I have been assigned to peer review the PTSD article as part of my Wiki Project Medicine course. Great work! In accordance to your work plan, I see the main focus of your edits were on the risk factors, diagnosis, and epidemiology of PTSD. Your additions to the trauma section are great, and they included good references and updated information.

The pathophysiology section is comprehensive, but is it a little dense, with some information that may not be clear to the lay person. Maybe adding some figures of the HPA axis could help clarify things and better explain the feedback system of CRH, cortisol, and the dexamethasone suppression test.

The last paragraph of the “International classification of diseases” section is a direct quotation of the source. You could consider summarizing this section in your own words. There are also a few statements that need citing, as indicated by the “citation needed” in brackets.

I liked the figure that you added for CBT.

In the EMDR section, the article does a good job of explaining the evidence behind it, but it also states alternative viewpoints.

Overall, you have made some good changes to a dense article, and added reliable up-to-date sources. The article remains neutral and does not appear to be biased. --Nguyencj (talk) 05:06, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks Chris! I'll definitely take a look at the pathophysiology (I admit I haven't paid much attention to that section). And Thanks for letting me know about the ICD quotation. I'll see what I can do to clean that section up. I really appreciate your feedback! Morgangoodyear (talk) 21:12, 12 December 2017 (UTC)