User talk:Morganrebeccalittle/sandbox

To further improve your article, you may want to include an introduction of Ida Wells so readers can better understand how influential Wells is in the women's movement. I like the way you organized your article, however, you might also want to make sure that the information written under a certain section ties back to the section topic. You also may want to add an introduction about the Women's suffrage movement in the beginning of the article to give a bit of historical context and then introduce the Alpha Suffrage Club.

Nancylim511 (talk) 05:28, 22 March 2019 (UTC)Nancy Lim

So far, you have a lot of great stuff and a lot of great potential! I would say though, that some of your sentences and transitions read a little bit choppily, so I would try and work on the sentence flow. Also, I think, like Nancy said above, that it would be beneficial to expand on Ida B. Well's contribution, as well as adding in information about other influencers. Finally, I think you could use more information about the parade (which I'm sure you planned on doing anyways), more on the exclusion of NAWSA, etc... You have a pretty good amount of sources, but I think the more the better! SO far though, it is great!

Kaylalouwill (talk) 05:04, 24 March 2019 (UTC)Kayla Williams