User talk:Moritherapy

User:Moritherapy/Juergen von Huendeberg
The content looks good. The only things I would suggest working on would be the lead (see WP:LEAD) and the article's headlines, which should use the == Headline name == format to build a table of contents. Then work on the references (putting them into standard form). Otherwise, you should be just fine. Let me know if you have more questions. —Mono·nomic 15:47, 24 March 2010 (UTC)