User talk:Morocoolguy/sandbox

Assessment of Article Draft
Major revisions necessary.

You need to make sure that your sentences are new and different from the text on the already-existing Jehane Noujaim page. You also need to make clear how your sentences will fit in with the ones that are already there. You can do this by indicating existing text like this: [Here is existing text about Naoujaim's schooling.]

Alternately, you could add your text directly to the existing page, making sure not to duplicate what's already there or erase good existing text.

As far as your sources, the Hollywood Reporter sources are good, but you need to fix the formatting on all the references so that there are no errors.

- Chronophoto (talk) 02:18, 10 February 2016 (UTC)