User talk:Morry24/draftarticle

Hi, I am a student editor working on a new article for a university topic. Morry24 (talk) 02:53, 2 September 2019 (UTC)

Hi Morry24, I enjoyed reading your article. It is well written, sticks to the topic and makes good use of links, citations etc. Great visuals added to. One suggestion: in the Lead section the information on UNINet largely replicates what you have further into the article. I suggest taking the specific informationa bout UNINet out in the Lead. I strongly encourage you to publish the article. If you want any help doing so, please contact me. JaneHaggis 04:52, 26 October 2019 (UTC)