User talk:Mosesheron/sandbox1

here is the initial draft of the translation. I copy edited the text, where necessary, in order to improve readability. Requesting your feedback. Mosesheron (talk) 14:54, 11 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Some passages are in need of inline citations. I inserted a citation needed tag in one place. Could you please provide that? It's in the draft, if you're interested. Mosesheron (talk) 15:11, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Also I couldn't find citation for reference no 7. It is maybe because I am not familiar with French wiki reference style. I had to convert every reference manually as translation tools are disabled here. Mosesheron (talk) 15:18, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Found it. That passage is in fact supported by by ref 1. They are perhaps one and the same. Mosesheron (talk) 15:35, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * I found the message ! the notification did't work.--JMGuyon (talk) 20:42, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * my feedback is: well done ! :)
 * Perhaps I would remove the metonymic and proleptic reason; These notions do not seem very clear to me.
 * I really like the "indolent reason", the "epistemicid" and the whole article--JMGuyon (talk) 20:50, 11 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Published the text. You are requested to make necessary changes, where so required. I will also think some alternatives to those two words. Thank you for your comment. Mosesheron (talk) 21:01, 11 August 2022 (UTC)