User talk:Moswanted123

Your submission at Articles for creation: MBB SE (June 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dodger67 was:

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Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 21:08, 15 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: MBB SE (June 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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LaMona (talk) 19:18, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: MBB SE (July 11)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tseung Kwan O was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Tseung Kwan O Let's talk 21:19, 11 July 2016 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:MBB SE


A tag has been placed on Draft:MBB SE requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be a clear copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from http://www.mbb.com/en/about-us/mission.html. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

If the external website or image belongs to you, and you want to allow Wikipedia to use the text or image — which means allowing other people to modify it — then you must verify that externally by one of the processes explained at Donating copyrighted materials. If you are not the owner of the external website or image but have permission from that owner, see Requesting copyright permission. You might want to look at Wikipedia's policies and guidelines for more details, or ask a question here.

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MBB SE
I had a look at Draft:MBB SE. A lot of it is copied from the company's website, which is a WP:Copyvio problem, so it's going to be deleted. If you're working for the company and have permission to use those sentences, then you need to first declare your "conflict of interest" and comply with the Terms of Use about paid contributors, and then get official e-mail messages sent from the company to our record tracking system to get permission recorded and everything un-deleted. The directions for that process are at WP:DONATETEXT.

Either way, I'd be happy to see you re-create it in your own words. Please try to write from the perspective of someone who wants to know what the company does. I see words like "technological and engineering expertise", but just what do they do? Do they sell services or products? Is it food or computers or cars or what? Nobody would ever know from that. But if you wrote something like "This subsidiary makes factory equipment, another one makes toilet paper, and the last one makes mattresses", then readers would probably learn something about the business. WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:53, 6 August 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: MBB SE has been accepted
 MBB SE, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 20:20, 6 August 2016 (UTC)
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 * And also re-written to remove the obvious copyvios. Thanks, DGG.  WhatamIdoing (talk) 20:42, 10 August 2016 (UTC)