User talk:Mouarick/sandbox

In this article I would avoid the use of the word 'Our', instead perhaps use the term, 'potential host' or targeted organism. The use of our would violate the encyclopedia detachment that Wikipedia works for. The information that you currently have is very good. And you have already linked the page to all the topics that I think are usefull and necessary. In the interest of being useful to your project, you could find a source that would describe how sheep avoid mass roundworm hatchings in order to provide a citation where it is asked for in the parasite page.

Thanks so much for providing this information and making wikipedia a better place! Best of luck on your project!

BoredBioStudent (talk) 20:29, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

If you look at the other sections they provide examples. You could provide specific examples for your sections also. For example for the skin what kind of parasites invade the body through the skin. By doing that you can link it to other Wikipedia pages.

Thaopazo (talk) 21:41, 5 May 2014 (UTC)thaopazo

This article looks really good so far. I think that it may be a good idea to possibly try to break up the plant a little bit like you did for the animal section. I am not exactly sure but it would possibly help with the flow a little bit, maybe splitting it into specific and non specific, Otherwise it looks great. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Smith Pohl (talk • contribs) 21:42, 5 May 2014 (UTC)