User talk:Mountain.22osu/sandbox

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 * 1) Bear in mind that Wikipedia articles are integrated into a whole. For article sections, this means the article itself - there's no need to explain or repeat things that a reader should have encountered higher up the page. They're also connected to other articles by wikilinks - if there's some term or concept that the average reader may not be familiar with, provide a link to the article where they can learn more.
 * 2) Don't forget to break your text up into paragraphs and use inline citations to link to your references. If you use the inline citation template available in the edit box (the place you write text in Wikipedia) not only does that keep the reference close to the place you cite it, it also makes it difficult to forget to include the actual source from which the citation came. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:16, 17 November 2014 (UTC)