User talk:Mountstella

April 2014
Please do not add commentary or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to Spratly Islands dispute. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Please do not add undue weight to the lead paragraph of an article; this information is already present within the main sections. -- benlisquare T•C•E 14:15, 16 April 2014 (UTC) Dear Benlisquare: This is a fascinating historical topic. There were a few errors and omissions in the text. one is the ambiguity of Principality of Freedomland and Republic of Konowue. This ambiguity seems to be a simple syntax error, as Free Territory of Freedomland, and Principlaity of Freedomland, (as well as Colonia), should all be connected on the paragraph as they were all official names used by Cloma for the territory at various stages. In contrast Republic of Konowue is an unrelated designation, not to be confused with the Cloma territorial designations. you can refer to the Greiman article as well as the wiki site, there is also a site for Colonia www.colonia.asia, that covers the historical facts in great detail. I am trying to help edit this site to reflect some lesser known but fascinating historical facts. mountstella