User talk:Movingqlong/Ice crystals/ChemEnjoyer Peer Review

Response to peer review
Hi ChemEnjoyer,

Thanks for your time reviewing my draft article. I really appreciate all your kind words and suggestions. I’m glad you like the rearrangement of the content. I found a citation for the mixed patterns and added that into the article. Thank you for reviewing the tone and balance as well! I’ve removed descriptors that give a sense of time to focus the article on the content rather than when researchers discovered it.

Addressing the lead and organization, I’m happy you like how I rearranged things, especially the merging of the geometry section. I’ve taken up your idea of creating a weather phenomena section because I think the optics and the clouds would fit nicely into there. Thank you for the suggestion! I’ve revised the lead section to be more indicative of what the rest of the article will be about.

Finally, I couldn’t find any uses for square crystals, but I did find information on different crystal structures like trigonal and cubic crystals. I added those to the formation section because they exist because of how they form. I also clarified the “Detection” section and expanded on depositional growth and ice crystal nucleation.

Again, thank you for your time and your suggestions. You’ve really helped me improve the article!

--Movingqlong (talk) 01:36, 16 April 2023 (UTC)