User talk:Mpatel1205/sandbox

Whitney Misters -	You should try googling scholar and academic search premier if you are having trouble finding information on your topic. -	The summary of the disease is good, don’t forget the epidemiology -	Nice job including headings to separate the information -	Don’t forget your mechanism and causes and prevention sections

Taneisha Griggs

Abstract: Great job on providing a thorough summary and listing key features! The definition or breakdown of the word was informative in layman terms. Also, you did a good job at showing the associations between gastrin and Zollinger-Ellison Syndrome.

Mechanism: Try researching your topic on Pubmed or Center of Disease and Control Website to find a possible mechanism or pathway. They may have articles on your condition. Include parts of the body that are affected.

Diagnostic-Overall great start!! I suggest make separate categories for symptoms, list the areas of the body that are effected for each category, and description of each diagnostic test (standard evaluation measures for each test) and the values associated with diagnosing Zollinger Ellison Syndrome

Symptoms: Good job on at listing the symptoms! The two things I suggest are giving readers more description for each symptom and list the part of the body that is effected.

Cause and Prevention-explain how this condition is initiated and prevention measures if applicable to your topic. Research-Try Google scholar to look up current research or clinical trial data on your topic. Overall, Good job!! — Preceding unsigned comment added by TGriggs2 (talk • contribs) 12:02, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Sweiner02 (talk) 21:13, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
 * At this point, you haven't done anything beside copy the original article. I cannot comment this or give you credit.