User talk:Mpettenger

MUNFW
Hey Mpettenger, just wanted to let you know that I have flagged your source as primary for MUNFW on the Model United Nations page. While I find the claim that MUNFW was first held in 1951 true, there should be at least a secondary source to back that claim, otherwise it may be removed since only the website backs that claim. The best way would be to find a publication in the newspaper archives of Stanford, most of which are currently not online, or a newspaper article from those times. Let me know if you're interested in finding this secondary source. --Pilaz (talk) 22:33, 22 August 2019 (UTC)

Hello - I added a citation from The Stanford Daily that references the conference. Please let me know if that works. I can also cite a textbook that refers to the conference if needed. Mpettenger (talk) 19:24, 29 August 2019 (UTC)

Recent edits to Model United Nations in the United States
Hello. I noticed that you made an edit that introduces praise or promotional language to the Model United Nations in the United States article. On Wikipedia, we adhere to a neutral point of view (NPOV) and avoid promotional language or puffery. Please read the NPOV policy page, as well as this page of language to avoid to better understand how to expand this article in a style suitable to an encyclopedia. If you have questions, please see the Help Desk page. Thank you! &#8213; Susmuffin Talk 21:21, 23 August 2019 (UTC)

Hello - thank you for your information about the NPOV policy. I have updated the language to be consistent with the rest of the paragraph and to include a neutral point of view. Mpettenger (talk) 19:29, 29 August 2019 (UTC)