User talk:Mpf57

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Feedback for annotated bibliography
This is a great start on your annotated bibliography, and you're doing a good job of paying attention to the strengths and weaknesses of each study and their relevance in terms of supporting or refuting your controversy. However, make sure that you check the kind of study you're using though to make sure it's the level of evidence you need. For example, the Thomsen article is not a randomized controlled trial and the Fielding & Simon article is an invited commentary on a study, not an empirical study itself or a true meta-analysis. Camand74 (talk) 17:04, 12 April 2018 (UTC)