User talk:Mpsmith15/sandbox

Great plan, Mitch! All great sources, too. I think you and Jeff will improve the page. --Dr AB Swan (talk) 16:57, 16 February 2019 (UTC)

Peer Review by the editor 2019
Some stuff I would merge together but some of these paragraphs are lacking examples or better details to get good clear and concise information. It does need to be restructured and overall I would suggest that more information from good valid studies/sources are added along with studies/ experiments done to find the info or conclusions the scientific community has agreed upon or accept. The editor 2019 (talk) 19:49, 6 March 2019 (UTC)

You bring up good points about the merging of paragraphs and the need for additional examples. We will definitely look into making these changes. Thanks for the advice Editor 2019.Mpsmith15 (talk) 17:50, 21 March 2019 (UTC)