User talk:Mr.Brannon/sandbox

"Articles Evaluation"

1. Biography of "William Milnor Roberts"

The article discusses the various achievements by Williams Roberts from Philadelphia, Pennsylvania, (born february 12, 1810, and deceased in 1881) whom was a prominent figure in the civil engineering community during his lifetime. He worked on and completed such projects as office of Ohio River Improvements, Eads Bridge construction, Northern Pacific Railroads, ect... His works range from assistant surveying construction, to making improvements and maintenance of the Mississippi River.Mr.Brannon (talk) 21:00, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

Create a section in your sandbox titled "Article evaluation"

 * The scope of the assignment is to leave notes about your observations and learnings from the three articles.
 * For this class, choose one from each of the following three groups for this assignment.
 * CE Biographies: Choose one
 * CE topics: Choose one
 * CE subjects: Choose one

Second scope item in Assignment
Risk Engineer (talk) 20:49, 25 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Choose at least 1 question relevant to the article you're evaluating and leave your evaluation on the article's Talk page. Be sure to sign your feedback with four tildes — ~.

The Henry Roe Campbell article fits the structure of what it is to have a lead section article far better than the Arthur M. Wellington article. The H.Campbell article gave a overall summary of the article and topics that will be addressed in the article. In the following paragraphs the article breaks down individual topics discussed in the article(ex: Early Life Works, West Philadelphia Railroad, Gettysburg Railroad, etc...). The Wellington article's structure had differences of how the article was written, when compared to the H.Campbell's article. The article's structure was written in a timeline manner, starting from his early works and his developments, to the actual projects he was involved in. The article also did not elaborate on the projects Wellington was involved in, as much as the H.Campbell's article did. H.Campbell's article gave a little more information about the projects he was involved in, instead of just stating the projects he was in as the other article did.Mr.Brannon (talk) 03:33, 23 March 2018 (UTC)

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