User talk:Mr.Zusul

For Delayed Birth
Hi there! I see you added some material to the entry For Delayed Birth: thanks for taking an interest in it! I could see where you were coming from with the edits, but they weren't backed up by references to secondary literature so I removed them. I'm sure you're right that the text probably should be read as multiple charms, and citing some secondary literature on this would be very helpful if you've noticed any. But since I'm not aware of any just now, I rephrased the header so that the claims made would be covered by the references cited. I was less convinced by the editorial headings you added to the text: since they're not there in the manuscript, I worry that it's a bit misleading to introduce them to the text and translation. But if you can cite a reputable edition/translation where these headings are used, that would help justify their inclusion in the Wikipedia entry. Thanks for your participation! Alarichall (talk) 10:46, 17 October 2017 (UTC)