User talk:Mr. Lestah/FIFA Ethics Committee History

Reagle review
@Mr. Lestah, good start. I did a bunch of editing fixing the broken citations, but even then you need to do three things before proceeding to mainspace:


 * 1) I don't understand what's going on with the citations numbering. The citations should be inserted in the prose, and the references will be populated automatically. The first, for example, by McPhillips is manually numbered one, has a number for citation [5], which actually points to #17? We need to discuss.
 * 2) The prose needs to be revised for clarity -- I put templates on a few examples.
 * 3) The tone needs to be more encyclopedic -- I put templates on a few examples.

Let's discuss. -Reagle (talk) 18:57, 23 February 2023 (UTC)

Hi @Mr. Lestah, I just edited your work and I think it looks good! I just made a few grammatical edits but the content and citations seem fine. Good work! Alise boal (talk) 17:04, 31 March 2023 (UTC)