User talk:Mr. Vikash Thakur/DRAFT/Juego

Comments from mujinga
I'll drop some comments here over the next days when I get a chance

Mujinga (talk) 10:24, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
 * First off, I moved the page so there's a talkpage for me to comment on. Apologies, I caused an issue by suggesting you create User talk:Mr. Vikash Thakur/YOURNEWDRAFT and not User:Mr. Vikash Thakur/YOURNEWDRAFT
 * Citation 1 - https://cms-subs.forbesindia.com/media/supplement_pdf/Entrepreneur_Final%20for%20WEB.pdf - is promotional crap unfortunately, per WP:FORBES. You wouldn't have known, but it's better to remove. It even says "DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions expressed in this supplement are not endorsed by Network 18 Media and Investments Limited. This is a marketing initiative and Forbes India journalists were not involved i producing this supplement."
 * Citation 2 - https://economictimes.indiatimes.com/company/juego-studio-private-limited/U72900KA2013PTC067688 - Economic Times is judged per WP:TOI, which I think is unfair but that's the consensus. Therefore better to remove or use for very basic uncontroversial claims
 * stopping here for now, pinging just to make sure you see this Mujinga (talk) 10:53, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for your support(I am very thank full), please suggest me now what can i do.. Mr. Vikash Thakur (talk) 17:21, 4 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Taking another look, this draft does seem rather promotional. There is a problem with Indian news sources documented at WP:NEWSORGINDIA - all the six citations seem to have this problem. Can you find any other indications of notability? Mujinga (talk) 17:37, 7 June 2024 (UTC)