User talk:Mr288361/Personal Sandbox

Very interesting article and a great subject to talk about. The article seemed well organized and there was a lot of material covered, even though there could have been more. There were very few grammatical and sentence structure errors. This was a pretty well written article for being a work in progress.

It was definitely engaging. I agree with the comments above that there could have been more information covered, but I feel like that's always the case when it comes to history. It was well organized into wikipedia friendly sections which made it easy to follow. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Tud55822 (talk • contribs) 20:10, 5 December 2011 (UTC)