User talk:Mr91east/The Sleepwalkers (music)

Editor remarks
 Jerry  delusional ¤ kangaroo 22:41, 19 November 2009 (UTC)
 * "The Sleepwalkers are (a)... trio"; this is a plurality disagreement error. The persons are members of a trio.  The band is a trio.  'The Sleepwalkers' is a trio.
 * Is this band notable? See WP:N, and WP:Music.
 * "based in" implies that they tour or perform substantially in other locations. Do they?
 * Is "Clipse Presents: Re-Up Gang" a notable album according to WP:Music? If so, consider wikilinking it, even if no article currently exists.
 * Article lacks any citations... who says these things are true? See WP:Cite, and WP:V.
 * "are an innovative"; this is an opinion expressed as a statement of fact. This is not appropriate for an encyclopedia.  Try "Music Magazine has referred to them as innovative", or omit the adjective altogether. This article should be written in a neutral point of view; see WP:NPOV.
 * "emerged with" and "in the form of" is purple prose.
 * "Diary features Marsha Ambrosius of Floetry, from Wale's freshman major label album titled Attention Deficit". This is a description of the album, and has nothing to do with the subject of this article.