User talk:MrBrightside2016

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Speedy deletion nomination of User:MrBrightside2016/sandbox


A tag has been placed on User:MrBrightside2016/sandbox, requesting that it be deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under two or more of the criteria for speedy deletion, by which pages can be deleted at any time, without discussion. If the page meets any of these strictly-defined criteria, then it may be soon be deleted by an administrator. The reasons it has been tagged are:
 * It seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. (See section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion.) Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Business for more information.
 * It appears to be a clear copyright infringement of http://www.onecar.com.au/honda.php. (See section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion.) For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. If the external website belongs to you, and you want to allow Wikipedia to use the text — which means allowing other people to modify it — then you must verify that externally by one of the processes explained at Donating copyrighted materials. If you are not the owner of the external website but have permission from that owner, see Requesting copyright permission. However, even if you use one of these processes to release copyrighted material to Wikipedia, it still needs to comply with the other policies and guidelines to be eligible for inclusion. If you would like any assistance with this, you can ask a question at the help desk.

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Hi, thanks for message. The sandbox provides a degree of protection for drafts, but copyright and promotional material can be removed from anywhere. The Honda India article you mentioned is at best OK, the Canada one doesn't even have proper ref. The list style is poor too, see Tesco for a well written company article. further comments Jimfbleak - talk to me?  06:05, 21 June 2017 (UTC)
 * You need to provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that it meets the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the company, press releases, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the company claims or interviewing its management. Most of your text is unsourced, and the sources you give mostly aren't independent third-party sources as defined above
 * it was written in a promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic. A few examples of unsourced claims presented as fact include:  guaranteed by Honda to be high quality parts... empowering disadvantaged Australians...  continue the valuable work they do in making a difference... continue their incredible work... We know we have the power to create meaningful change
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Jayride.com (September 5)
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Sulfurboy (talk) 04:54, 5 September 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Jayride.com (October 5)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

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SwisterTwister  talk  02:46, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Honda Australia (June 3)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bradv was:

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Brad v  13:48, 3 June 2018 (UTC)