User talk:Mr Ambergreen

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Tips on your article
Hi Mr Ambergreen! Here are some tips on what you can do to get your article accepted at AfC. I hope you take these constructively, as we have our own "way" here at Wikipedia, and once you get one article down..you'll be ready to roll on the next :)
 * 1) 1 You need a lede. So, the first paragraph of any article should feature the name of the article in bold, like you have, but followed by what the subject is. A brief overview, basically. Here is an example: Ada Initiative. See how the first paragraph at the top just gives a brief overview? What is CR Smith Overview? Where are they based out of and what do they provide?
 * 2) Instead of starting out each paragraph with a bold word, like history, you start a new section. You do this by typing:
 * ==History== 
 * CR Smith Overview was founded in blahblahblah (or whatever text with citations of course).
 * That will make a headline like you see above, called "Tips on your article," and will also provide a table of content for your article automatically.


 * 1) You need citations for the history section, preferably those that are NOT from the company itself. If you can't find those sources, it might be best to scrap any section that does not have citations. Even if that means the article is a stub, a very small article. You can always expand it later once it's in the Wikipedia main space.
 * 2) When writing about Gerard Eadie, you don't call him "Mr. Eadie," that's not normal writing convention. So just call him by his surname.
 * 3) In the "brand identity" part, you have to remove the writing about them "pioneering" and their vans being "synonymous" and "famously" etc. Those words are peacock words, meaning they promote the subject. We have to remain completely neutral on Wikipedia, meaning we can't use words like that, no matter how famous they might be. Like, sentences like this "This has paved the way for other companies to sponsor both clubs since CR Smith made this ground breaking change." That means nothing without a citation, and anyone can say anyone paved the way :)
 * 4) In the "Famous Buildings" section, rename it to "Notable installations". Good job at linking to buildings!
 * 5) Remove the online presence section. It's not relevant to being in an encyclopedia.
 * 6) In the "Corporate Social Responsibility" section. It should be "Corporate social responsibility," just like the other sections - we don't capitalize every word in a section. Remove "strong relationships" just say relationships. Don't call "Charlene Joiner" by her first name. Just like men, we use women's surnames to write about them.
 * 7) Remove all of the bottom content about standards. If people want to know about that they will go to their website.

Basically, if there is no citation for it, it shouldn't be in the article. Technically, this article should be as simple as stating that CR Smith is a window and door maker and supplier from Scotland, where they are located, the history, the most recent sales data (perhaps) - simple facts that are ALL cited and not original research. Keep it simple, keep it cited and remove any non-cited content. Here are some additional sources (some you might have used?) you can use: and more. If you search on GOogle news you can find a TON of content!! I hope this helps! Sarah (talk) 15:13, 12 April 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia&.
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Aaron Booth (talk) 05:09, 16 April 2012 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
 Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.
 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, you can find it at Wikipedia&.
 * To edit the submission, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the help desk, via real time chat with helpers, or on the [ reviewer's talk page]
 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Sitush (talk) 09:44, 27 April 2012 (UTC)

Your article submission CR Smith Window Manufacturers


Hello Mr Ambergreen. It has now been over six months since you last edited your article submission, entitled CR Smith Window Manufacturers.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. j⚛e deckertalk 19:23, 18 June 2013 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of User:Mr Ambergreen/sandbox


A tag has been placed on User:Mr Ambergreen/sandbox, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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