User talk:Mrd12/sandbox

=Analysis of Summary Article= This is a good start but you have more work to do. Try to make this look more like the main article while improving it's content. Don't move this article out of the sandbox until you get my go ahead.
 * The most obvious thing is you need to use proper citations. You need to let me know if you're having trouble with this.
 * Where is all the research you did for this article? You need to incorporate it
 * Replace "Here the links from where I got my information:" with a conventional reference list
 * Don't dump the references that already exist in the current article (the one you're improving) if they're useful. You should be building on the existing article, not eliminating it.

--JD Mathewson (talk), Adjunct Professor, Hood College 08:26, 3 April 2014 (UTC)