User talk:Mrdavis789/sandbox

Hi!

Overall, I really liked the information you will be adding to the article!

Strengths: - I liked that the introduction included definitions/defining characteristics from many sources. - The list of causes was extensive! - Neutral tone throughout - Strong writing - 6 sources!

Could work on: - In the "description" section you mentioned that existential crisis can be similar to depression and anxiety. I think this should be expanded on to describe how they are similar. I don't think it needs more than two-three sentences, but expanding on the sentence will make it stronger. - Your list of causes were in bullet points. I am wondering if any of the causes could be expanded on? They did seem straightforward but you never know if the audience will be able to connect the two variables together. - Four out of six of your sources were over ten years old. Although they are great sources, if you have time/want to (I don't think its required to have newer sources) try to find sources published in the last ten years.

Great job!! Maggie