User talk:Mreid123/sandbox

Hi Maya, Wow, you really condensed that pull quote. It's a funny passage because it's an encyclopedia entry that's quoting another encyclopedia. My suggestions are minimal. Lc.umd (talk)
 * In the last sentence, remove "many" — this is subjective language Wikipedia doesn't want included.
 * I feel like those three sentences need a "[citation needed]" tag. I'm curious where Encyclopedia Britanica got their information. It might be a good idea for someone (not necessarily you since you're starting by cleaning this up) find references for these statements.