User talk:Mrinalis

September 2017
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Introduction
Hello, my name is Mrinalini. I am a student at Carnegie Mellon University. I am currently taking the Organizational Communication course where we are learning to use Wikipedia. Mrinalis (talk) 20:36, 16 September 2017 (UTC)

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Removing Groupthink and Decision Making Sections
Hello, my name is Mrinalini and I am a student at Carnegie Mellon University. I have been editing the Diffusion of Responsibility article (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diffusion_of_responsibility) and I think it would improve clarity if we removed the concepts of groupthink and decision making since those concepts have their own wiki articles. These concepts are very different from diffusion of responsibility and I think it would be valuable to primarily focus on diffusion of responsibility instead of trying to cover many concepts in one article. Please do let me know if you have any reservations for doing so. Thank you for your input Mrinalis (talk) 23:30, 29 October 2017 (UTC)

Removing redundancies
I think it will improve clarity to remove redundancies in the diffusion of responsibility article, such as citations of the murder of Kitty Genovese. What are your thoughts?

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Tv55e52's Peer Review
Peer Notes:


 * "Groupthink" subheading is empty under "Consequences"
 * I would elaborate more on the Richmond High School Gang Rape; what were the outcomes in the end? Was the diffusion of responsibility later acknowledged? Things along these lines may be helpful in adding substance to this example
 * Perhaps add in a few sentences / short paragraph on impacts of diffusion of responsibility as they relate to and impact wars
 * Overall, great work on the article with ample examples; could just use a bit more elaboration on some of these examples!

Tv55e52 (talk) 04:09, 29 November 2017 (UTC)