User talk:Mrman0930

Mrman0930, you are invited to the Teahouse!
Mrman0930, I reviewed your additions to your article. It seems like you are just getting started, I would recommend improving the overall wikipedia article by simplifying it. It may seem overwhelming to redo the whole article since it is so long, but there are some simple sentence improvements that would have a big impact on the article. The organization of the article is also lacking. Improving the organization and making it easier to understand could make a big difference without having to rewrite the whole article. -Travis Hartig (Trh50 (talk) 14:35, 14 July 2020 (UTC))

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