User talk:MrsAggie1114/sandbox

I really liked that Light in August included a list of all characters and a little about them. I always feel that is helpful for people who may have never read this particular story before. Another thing I may add to Absalom, Absalom would be the Theme section of the Wiki article as well.

Both of these topics would involve me either reading Absalom, Absalom or doing more extreme research through library sources or other scholarly sources to provide correct and neutral information on the story by Faulkner.

I didn’t like that the list on where they received the information from was under NOTES and not REFERANCES in the Absalom, Absalom article.

Sarah's Peer Review
I liked the way the article improved section, the introduction section, which was listed as needing improvement. I liked the Notable Guards section. However, the formatting was a little confusing with the gray boxes. I liked the way each guard listed had a link to their respective Wikipedia pages. I would suggest you put the notable guards section at the end and add a little explanation about the guards. This may help the reader understand the significance of the guards listed. The most important thing to do to improve the article is add a bibliography and cite your sources throughout the prose.Night storms (talk) 18:28, 30 April 2018 (UTC)