User talk:MrsLaura0702/Finalproject

Hi Laura, I think you have some good ideas in your outline. It has a good flow to it and hits all the major points of the assignment. To give your article a little more flesh, you may want to have a section dedicated to the anatomy of a flag (i.e. what they symbolize for cultures, the materials they are made of, how they are made, etc.) Describing some of these ideas can also unveil to the readers where some of the issues arise from. I know you have a brief overall description now, but it may be good to expand on it. Also flags can be delicate objects as far as ethics/repatriation/etc. It may be good to include a section on the sensitivity that surrounds them which you can possibly back up with "notable examples." Overall, I think you have a good start and hope my comments are helpful. - Andrea Abrahamsen