User talk:Mrw7816/sandbox

Hey Michael,

One thing I would consider doing for your article is adding a intro paragraph. A lot of article have a couple sentences just setting up the topic before diving into content, which has a little bit nicer flow to it. If you can link any of the topics in your article to other wikipedia article I would do that as well. The VASMIR engine, NASA, and names of any prominent scientist in your article would be links I would look at. Overall I think the article is well written and good! The tone is even and not favoring any particular part. You have a good amount of sources. I don't know much about engines but this sounds like a cool topic! Mcdavid.j (talk) 06:49, 8 August 2017 (UTC)

Under the advantages section I would maybe just add one sentence, explaining very briefly what the others are that you are comparing them too. That should give a better more descriptive feel as to why they are a bigger advantage. Other than that one comment, your article is very neutral in tone, and well written! -Kathleen Duffey