User talk:Msel20/sandbox

This was really well done, but maybe consider adding some more specifics to the neutral voice. The neutral voice seems to give a very generic overlay think about adding a state-specific example or adding in something specific to your company. --Kgoncalves10 (talk) 18:34, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Wow, it was really well-organized analysis, I thought. But I think it could be better if you mention how three cases and anaylsis could be related easily in the actual situation at a neutral voice summary. However, it was really good! Tosel978 (talk) 16:02, 5 April 2020 (UTC)