User talk:Mslolley123/sandbox

Tiffany's peer review
I was only able to view the intro of your article, but it looked very good. It was informative, direct, and did not show a set opinion on the politician.

Zach's Peer Review
Your grammar and structure are perfect, Montana. The only change I can think of that you might want to make would be to break some of that up with some headers and subsections, such as "Education" and listing the '79 graduation or "Philanthropy" and list his involvement with St. Jude.Zsburnette (talk) 13:14, 3 July 2019 (UTC)