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March 2013
Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. I noticed your recent edit to China does not have an edit summary. Please provide one before saving your changes to an article, as the summaries are quite helpful to people browsing an article's history. Thanks! JohnBlackburne wordsdeeds 21:37, 1 March 2013 (UTC)

Paragraphs
Msundqvist, you appear to be on a blitz against long paragraphs. Now, if you are really a new editor, and not an old editor under a new name, you might need to know a few things about how Wikipedia works.

There are people on Wikipedia whose commitment is to policing the Manual of Style. One of the things that they police is some arbitrary rule that says that an Introduction ought not have too many paragraphs. So if you make five out of four, you have created a problem.

Also, in the case of Leonardo da Vinci, the intro uses a number of words that the style police would dearly love to edit out. The Manual of Style discourages the use of words like "famous" and "talented". If you go back to the article, you will see that both those words have been used, and trust me, they have been subject to a long battle! Please do not split the quote from Helen Gardner away from the sentence that goes before it. It is only the judiciously placed quotations and the very long string of oddly located references that hold the statements in place. You see, the style police know that "talented" and "famous" are forbidden words and cannot understand why it is necessary to say "most diversely talented" about Leonardo and "most famous" about the Mona Lisa.

The large generic articles, and articles of major importance are generally watched by a lot of people, often 60-80 and in the case of Leonardo, over 1,000. Any change gets spotted quickly. It means too that the articles are often very stable, not having had any real change (apart from vandalism) for several years unless new research brings something to light. There are other old generic articles that are hopelessly badly composed and written, so that major contributors like me just take one look and change page because the job is overwhelming. I would urge you to focus your attention on poor articles rather than cruising around chopping up paragraphs in articles that already work well.


 * Cheers! Amandajm (talk) 15:17, 4 March 2013 (UTC)

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Proposed deletion of Lily rothman


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Your GA nomination of Larry Page
Hi,

Thanks for leaving a message on my talk page saying you've addressed the issue with the cleanup banners on this page. I have just very quickly skimmed through it and I think the language needs a fair amount of improvement to get it to read as I'd expect an article with GA status to. Rather than keep renominating I thinking nominating this for Peer_review might be sensible just to iron out these minor problems to allow a more indepth GA review to happen later. -- Cd5464 (talk) 19:19, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I would advise leaving the GA nomination for the moment There is still a fair amount of work left. Regards,--Soulparadox (talk) 05:23, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

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Great to see your Wikipedia skills developing!
Dear Msundqvist: I am by no means a Wiki superstar, but I can see that you are improving through the best way possible—continuing work and research, and persistence. It is excellent to bear witness to, and I look forward to future collaborative work on this encyclopedic resource! Regards,--Soulparadox (talk) 05:21, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

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Gautama Buddha
Hi Msundqvist. I'm sorry to say, but I've reverted your edits at Gautama Buddha. Although the quotes you've added are nice (I love the account of the young Gautama watching his father plowing), they're WP:UNDUE for an encyclopedic article. Besides, taking those accounts as historical accounts is an interpretation, which we have to leave to the scholars (personally, I think that the "plowing-account" is too nice. It deviates from the style of most sutras, being closer to a narrative than to a pointy list. And if this account was really from the Buddha, then it's weird that this "pericope" is used only one time). Vetter, Gombrich, and Bronkhorst, to name a few, have strong doubts about the historical accuracy of those accounts. The enlightenment-account is probably highly fabricated; Gautama's enlightenment "experience" may have been 'no more' than the realisation that dhyana isn an effective means to still the mind. See Enlightenment in Buddhism for more info on this. See also: Vetter can easily be found as a pdf; Gombrich and Bronkhorst too. If you've got questions on this, please contact me. Best regards,  Joshua Jonathan   -  Let's talk!   14:32, 23 April 2015 (UTC)
 * And now that I'm reading it again, I notice the following:
 * "I entered & remained in the first jhana: rapture & pleasure born from seclusion, accompanied by directed thought & evaluation. Could that be the path to Awakening?' Then following on that memory came the realization: 'That is the path to Awakening.'"
 * Where-after he engages in meditation, sees his past lives etc, discovers the four noble truths, which describe the way which leads to liberation, and with discovering this path he is liberated! As Bronkhorst and other shave noticed: this is a contradiction, since he discovers how to be liberated, but himself is liberated by this discovery! The childhood-memory only adds to the contradiction, since it states that the recollection of that memory already showed him the way to liberation, namely the practice of dhyana,while MN 26 says that he only realized this way after the recollection of the past lives etc. It also shows the friction between two "ways" to liberation, namely dhyana and insight (bodhi, prajna). The childhood-memory emphasizes dhyana, while the Maha Saccaka Sutra (MN36) emphasizes insight. It's a pity, but "we" Buddhists don't have perfect answers, or narratives, either. Best regards,  Joshua Jonathan   -  Let's talk!   14:48, 23 April 2015 (UTC)

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